Friday, May 27, 2011

I Like Martin's ASoIaF, but...

As the first season of the HBO series based on George R.R. Martin's A Song of Ice and Fire series 1st book (A Game of Thrones) reaches it's climax, I've been re-reading the series in anticipation of the of the 5th book, A Dance with Dragons, set to be released in July. I just started the 4th book, A Feast for Crows, and, because I've read them one after another, have been struck--well, "jarred" is more like it--by the way Martin chose to open the 4th book with completely new POV characters in locales either only briefly visited (the Iron Islands) or never visited (Dorne).  It was an interesting gamble and, so far, I have to agree with this blogger: I don't think it works.

But in AFFC George has got us going on a sight-seeing trip all over the goshdanged place, from one "exotic" locale to another. We're reading stories about characters we've only just met and don't give a fig about, and the whole thing has gone from the tale of a family -- the Starks -- and their feud with another family -- the Lannisters -- to a tale about a whole bunch of randoms from exotic, fantastical realms, and isn't the whole thing just so *epic* now and soon there will be a world battle and dragons and magic and typical epic fantasy crap and blech! It's like, now we get exotic, strange, foreign DORNE! And weird, unpredictable, barbaric GREYJOYS! And crazy-ass, mumbo-jumbo death cult religion, and exotic, foreign city that is WHEREVER THE HELL ARYA ENDS UP! I can't even remember the name of the place, that's how much I care... the Free Cities? I. Don't. Care.


I find the Greyjoy characters boring and Dorne is only OK and bordering on uninteresting to me. I think a little more familiarity--especially to open the book--may have been a better way to go.  Of course, Martin acknowledges some problems with the 4th/5th books. Basically, both will cover about the same time period. The original 4th book was getting too big, so he stripped chapters out, put them in the 5th and got it done.  It looks like most of the chapters stripped were of familiar characters, though.  Anyway, we all have opinions, though. I'll see if my mind changes as I go and, perhaps, it will all make sense once I read 4/5 back to back.

Thursday, May 26, 2011

Proofed--now another Proof

Proofed the first proof.  Changed formatting of footnotes, added, some blank pages, re-did Index, re-worked the Intro. Re-submitted, approved and now...another proof is on the way. Hopefully this will be OK.

Friday, May 20, 2011

Israel Hebert

I recently discovered that my Great-great Grandfather Israel Hebert was quite an upstanding member of his community, Racine, Quebec. July 16th (my birthday, coincidentally) will be "Israel Hebert Day" and the town is naming a street after him. More can be found at www.israelhebert.com .  Cool!

Proof received

Got the proof yesterday. Kind of weird to see your work in book form. Looks like the footnote formatting is good. I'll be checking it for the next couple days.

Monday, May 16, 2011

Proof on the way

Proof is on the way, be 5-7 days. Hoping not too much revising to be done. Worried a bit about the way the footnote formatting came out.

Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Burgundians on the way

I'm pleased to announce that, thanks to Createspace, I'm publishing my first (and probably only!) historical monograph, Burgundians in the Mist.  If you're interested, check out the preview chapter.